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Friday, September 17, 2021

Writing, Nobody Should Litter

 This week in writing we are writing persuasive text. This time we get to pick our own topic, my topic is nobody should litter. I am very proud of this and I think I came up with some pretty good reasons.                  Now I will show you what I wrote.

I hope you like this piece of writing It took me 4 days to complete and it has 271 words on it.

Have you been littering?



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3 comments:

  1. AnonymousSeptember 30, 2021 at 10:16 AM

    No I haven't littered Oscar, and you have put some great reasons why you shouldn't litter. Maybe next time you could possibly add more reasons?

    Eli

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  2. AnonymousNovember 5, 2021 at 10:21 AM

    Hi Oscar, Gus here! Amazing litter explanation! I really liked how you started and ended with Te Reo Māori! Though, maybe next tine you could make it more clear on what text it is? Otherwise, amazing!

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